T15- Analysing previous A2 students videos

 WWW:
~The use of grey scale it fits the narrative.
~ the use of layers
~Good use of  shots for example the beginning we saw a mid shot of just her and then cut to a long shot to show the boy behind her and the close up to show her face expressions.
~Good use of prop especially the smoke machine, in the two shot of the her and the boy.
~Good use of location
~Good use of costume
~Good camera angles, lots of negative space especially in the two shot, where we have the boy behind her.

EBI:

They hadn't use the zoom.



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WWW:
Good sense of humor.
The beginning scene of the mug- good framing and composition
The comical character and the costumes
The use of grey scale to differentiate past and present and to connote day-dreaming
The location fits the narrative
The fast pace edit.

EBI:
They had use better Costumes.



WWW:
Editing pace fit the music
Locations were well thought of
Narrative is very clear-overall

EBI:
Much thought was put into mise-un-scene
Lighting
Lip-syncing was good.



WWW:
The variety was shot was certainly better than the previous video
Band's costumes were much better than other videos
Lip syncing was good
Location was good

EBI:
If they hadnt use black and white
If narrative was clear.



WWW:
Lip-syncing  was okay
Good use of green screen-suitable
Andrew goodwin-myrics matching the video
Narative was clear
Genre clear

EBI:
Lip-syncing could be better
Not enought variety of shots
Framing and composition could be better.